Feedback and Revisions

So far, my group has developed a rough draft of our film project. There are still a lot of aspects that need improvement, however. After showing the film to the class, constructive criticism was offered by several classmates on how to make revisions. We're planning on re-shooting several scenes. The scene where Austin (Trey) receives an unknown phone call needs to be shot again because the phone screen is not in focus. Transition scenes need to be edited for a smoother effect. The opening did not portray the story clearly enough and there was a lot of confusion among audience members. The story needs a more effective demonstration.